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snogged ([personal profile] snogged) wrote2011-11-15 09:30 pm
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HIMYM Drabble - Baking Soda and Vinegar (Barney/Robin) FRAO/NC-17

Title: Baking Soda and Vinegar
Author: snogged
Disclaimer: Carter Bays and Craig Thomas own it all. I own nothing.
Rating: FRAO/NC-17
Word Count: 100
Summary: The sex scene that's set between "Disaster, Averted" and "Tick, Tick, Tick."
A/N: Written for the [livejournal.com profile] barneyrobin Drabbe-A-Thon



They’re barely in his living room by the time Robin’s panties are crumpled in his fist, a scrap of fabric soaked with her anticipation.

Barely in the bedroom before they’re both naked.

Former lovers collide, groping hands and eager tongues. There’s no wrong in it. There’s just right. Right now.

Barney pushes her down on the bed, taking the lead, taking the plunge. Somewhere down the line, she flips him over, raking her nails over his chest as her body rocks against him.

They are a chemical reaction (baking soda and vinegar) on the brink of explosion.

Tick.

Tick.

Boom.

[identity profile] secondmezzanine.livejournal.com 2011-11-16 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
Unf! Totally hot, girl!

[identity profile] snogged.livejournal.com 2011-11-16 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
That's what I was going for!!

[identity profile] novemberrain007.livejournal.com 2011-11-16 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmm. Fabulous capture of the tension between them, and SO hot and explosive! I can really picture this happening, knowing how spontaneous they both are.

Absolutely LOVE the ending!

[identity profile] snogged.livejournal.com 2011-11-16 05:21 am (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this!
I had fun writing it. :)

[identity profile] maryfic.livejournal.com 2011-11-17 03:05 am (UTC)(link)
OMG. I know I didn't actually spoil myself....remember when I said I couldn't see Barney/Robin....yeah. Thanks, love. Not anymore. Ha!

Also - slapbetting is righteous, and I've just finished the Super Bowl episode of S2. Still so very far from the current season. *sigh* But I am SO enjoying my Barney. Especially Lily painting nude Barney.

And this drabble? Amazing. How do y ou do it in 100 words? Je-wah!

[identity profile] snogged.livejournal.com 2011-11-17 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
Glad I brought you over. :)

I'm glad that you're enjoying Season 2 so much (it's one of my favorites. Second only to Season 3.)

I'm not sure how I do it. I just know that 100 words is always something I strive for when I try to write a drabble. It doesn't always work out, but I really push myself to get there.
Edited 2011-11-17 03:44 (UTC)