Love this! What a brilliant idea to introduce Dawn's POV through her diary. I also love Cordelia as seen through Dawn's eyes, how Dawn views Cordelia as special not only because of the things Cordelia is, but by how she makes Dawn feel, how she makes Dawn feel like somebody special, like her sister is. And I liked Dawn's reasoning at the end: her sister's job is to save the world, so she must be failing if--as usual--Faith fails to save Dawnie's world. Lovely.
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on 2015-09-17 12:57 am (UTC)Love this! What a brilliant idea to introduce Dawn's POV through her diary. I also love Cordelia as seen through Dawn's eyes, how Dawn views Cordelia as special not only because of the things Cordelia is, but by how she makes Dawn feel, how she makes Dawn feel like somebody special, like her sister is. And I liked Dawn's reasoning at the end: her sister's job is to save the world, so she must be failing if--as usual--Faith fails to save Dawnie's world. Lovely.