HIMYM Drabble: State of Loneliness (Ted/Marshall) FRT-13/PG-13

[snogged]

Title: State of Loneliness
Author: snogged
Disclaimer: Carter Bays and Craig Thomas own How I Met Your Mother. I don’t. Please don’t sue.
Pairing: Ted/Marshall
Word Count: 100
Rating/Warnings: FRT-13/PG-13; slash
Setting: Post-Season 1
Summary: Ted gets the girl but rewrites the story...
A/N: Written for aaronlisa who requested Ted/Marshall - loneliness. Hope you enjoy it despite it being written in the 2nd Person.



Welcome to the state of Loneliness. Population: Marshall. Please keep your hands and feet inside the car at all times…

It would be easy to brag, to tell the whole world how you made it rain and got the girl. But you can’t. Not when your best friend – the mountain man- is drowning in the river flood of his tears.

So Robin goes home and you sit down beside him. Your body presses against his tighter than it ever did on that freezing cold road trip, your arms hold him. And with his lips, he thanks you for the…

Solace.

Comments

[aaronlisa.livejournal.com]

You know you're making me like second person a lot. Your Ted voice is spot on. I really, really like how you did this. Thank you!

[snogged.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, sweetie.

As for second person narrative...it only seems to come out when I'm writing Ted.