*puppy dog eyes*

[snogged]

I know you all have busy lives and that it's only been about 24 hours since my last request but I really, really want a beta for this Spangel story that I wrote for Angel's Bunnies.

I just want to make sure I put commas in the right places and that my tense is correct.

And it's short too. It's only about two pages, I think.

*gets on her knees and begs her flist*